hello this is my language portfolio
He goes dead because he fighted with a animal,
And the animal picked steve in his breast and he goes dead
Everybody liked him because he was a morally strong men he was a sample for the people.
I tinke that Steve a half animail and half man
And he stunted with animals. I don't liked him because it was a stupid man who fight whit animals.
Zilverhahoorn 19
5237 HB den Bosch
Danny Hakvoort
The Netherlands
The Australian Zoo
Attention: Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
Steve Irwin way
Queensland 4519
Australian
2 October 2007
Dear Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
I was so sorry to hear that Steve died. I thought he was brave because he was a hero.
And he was a very morally strong men .he was a sample for the people.
I was scared for dogs and I saw the TV program from steve Irwin .
I think why I am scared for the dogs. the dog is a nice and funny animal .
And I tanks Steve for his program it was a very nice to saw that .
He was so mad about animals and I was so down to hear that Steve was dead.
And the next day I buy a new dog and his name is Steve .
And Steve was always so happy and I tinked that the animals that like .
His show ware very danger and thrilling it was nice to saw him.
All the best
Danny hakvoort
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
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Steven Irwin
Hello this is my language portfolio
He goes dead because he fought with a sting ray,
And the animal picked Steve in his breast and He died.
Everybody liked him because he was a morally strong men he was a good example for the people.
I think that Steve a half animal and half man
And he stunted with animals. I don't liked him because it was a stupid man who fight with animals.
Zilverhahoorn 19
5237 HB den Bosch
Danny Hakvoort
The Netherlands
The Australian Zoo
Attention: Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
Steve Irwin way
Queensland 4519
Australian
2 October 2007
Dear Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
I was so sorry to hear that Steve died. I thought he was brave because he was a hero.
And he was a very morally strong man .He was a sample for the people.
I was scared for dogs and I saw the TV program from Steve Irwin .
I asked myself why am I scared of the dogs. The dog are nice and funny animals.
And I thanks to Steve for his program I'm not afraid of dogs anymore.
He was so mad about animals and I was so down to hear that Steve was dead.
And the next day I bought a new dog and his name is Steve .
And Steve was always so happy that I really like .
His shows were very dangerous and thrilling it was nice to saw him.
All the best
Danny hakvoort
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